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Justin nodded and went out to
the stage. He did his job well. During the show I met the whole crew. They were
so friendly and great people. I already liked them and I think that they liked
me too. After a while Justin performed one of my favorite songs, OLLG. I loved
it. All what I thought was: Where is the OLLG? I thought about it until someone
grabbed me from behind and throw me on the stage. Now I knew who the OLLG was
today! It was me!
Chapter 4:
I was so
nervous. I couldn’t believe that I was the OLLG. I dreamed of this day since 2009.
2 of Justin's dancers came for me, brought
me to the throne and Justin
set myself a floral
wreath on. WOW I felt like I was in
heaven. Justin came to me and smiled at me. He
was so adorable.
J*singing*:
I can fix up your broken heart
I can give you a brand new start
I can make you believe
I just wanna set one girl free to fall
She's free to fall
With me
My hearts locked and nowhere that I got the key
I'll take her and leave the world
With one less lonely girl
I can give you a brand new start
I can make you believe
I just wanna set one girl free to fall
She's free to fall
With me
My hearts locked and nowhere that I got the key
I'll take her and leave the world
With one less lonely girl
I melted in front of him.
After he finished the song he came back to me, took my hand and brought me in
the middle of the stage. I felt very unsecure. As Justin noticed that, he came
closer to me and whispered in my ear:
J: Don’t worry. I’m here and I
don’t let you go.
I smiled and calmed myself
down.
J: So my Beliebers *shrieking* this is (YN) *shrieking* and she’s one of my best friends *shrieking* and
I really like her *shrieking* so do you like her?
The crowd screamed their souls
from their body. Justin laughed and looked at me.
J: I think this is a yes.
Justin brought me down from
the stage. He finished his concert with his last song Baby. It was amazing, the
concert was amazing, Justin’s songs are amazing and Justin’s amazing! I really
liked him.
J: Thanks and goodnight. I
love you.
Justin went
off of the stage and ran to me. He picked me up and spun me around.
(YN):
Justin! Put me down!
He put me
down and looked deep in my eyes.
J: Have
I told you before that you're beautiful?
I blushed.
(YN): Aww thanks but please stop it.
J*laughing*: Why?
(YN): You know that I always blush when you give me compliments.
Justin laughed and picked me up again. After a few minutes he broke the silence.
I was still in Justin’s arms.
J: I'm impressed.
(YN): Why?
J: Because
usually when I
hug a girl after
my concert they always say: Yikes Justin, go away you
sweat and your smell is not very
pleasant! But I can always hug you, just when I just want to. Even though I'm sweaty and not smell
good! Why?
Justin pulled me down and looked at me. I looked down on my lap.
(YN): B-because……Because I enjoy it.
I enjoy when I can hug you. I
enjoy when I can lie in your arms. And to me
that's no matter whether
you sweat or if
you don’t smell good or something else. I just- I just really
like you.
J: Aww
you’re so cute. I love yo-it! He laughed. I really like you too. I’ve never
fall in love with a girl in two days I can say; it was love at the first sight.
He smiled.
(YN): Aww.
I think we feel the same.
J: Really?
(YN): Yes!
Justin?
J: Yes?
(YN): Thank
you!
J: For
what?
(YN): For
all! For your care! That I was you OLLG! Simple said for all.
J: Nothing
to thank.
He smiled
and leaned in to kiss me. He was inches from my lips away. Just as he would
kiss me a loud voice yelled after Justin. We quickly pulled away.
S: Justin!
Damn where are you?
J: I’m here
Scooter.
Scooter
came closer to us.
S: Good
that I’ve found you! Common boy! Have
you all your suitcases?
Justin
looked frustrated.
J: What?
Why?
S: Have you
forgotten. You’re on tour!
J: Oh no!
Yes I know!
Justin
looked at me than at Scooter. Scooter went away and sent Justin a weird look.
J: I’m so
sorry! I’ve forgotten. I’m on tour. And-
I cut his
sentence.
(YN): And
you’re leaving. I know thank you Justin for all. Bye!
I run away.
Tears rolled
down my cheeks. I was so sad. I know that he
was on tour but I would miss him so much because *deep breath* I think I’m
really in love with him. As I ran, I heard someone behind me. I ran as fast as
possible out from the building and
stopped when I was finally in the open. I
took a short break to gasp for air.
But then I already felt someone grabbed me by
my waist and
turned me. I saw Justin standing in
front of me.
J: Listen.
(YN): Justin, do you don’t understand? You broke my heart. I know that
we barely know each other but I really like you and *deep breath* I fell in
love with you. I know that you don’t with me but I must say you this before you
go away and we never see each other again. OK?
J: I fell in love with you to but-
(YN): I understand that you can’t stay with me because you’re on tour
and you can’t go out with me because maybe Selena see this and all of this but
first you make me fall in love with you and then you knock off
just as if nothing
had happened. With this you're
breaking my heart. But I understand
this. You're the first boy I fell
in love. Why do I always have bad luck? I fell
madly in love with you and you don’t even like me. Well
it doesn’t matter. I don’t want to bother you anymore. Thanks
Justin for the 2
best days of my
life. I wish you all the best and hope that one day you find your dream girl. Bye!
I cried.
Just as I would walk away Justin wrapped me by my waist and pulled me closer to
him.
J: I fell
in love with you too and I don’t want to leave you. You said you hope that I
find my dream girl? Then don’t leave me because you’re my dream girl.
(YN): Are
you serious?
J: Yes,
I’m. If you want than you can came with me on tour and then we get to know each
other better.
He winked
at me and smiled.
(YN): I
would love to. But I’m sure my family wouldn’t allow this. And in
September I have to go back to school and I must go back to
Canada because when I ask my parents to join you, they find out that Grace
throw me out of the common house and they-
My sentence was cut up. Justin pressed his lips against mine. I felt
thousand of butterflies in my stomach. I knew that Justin was the Mr. Right in
my life.
J: You talk
too much. Let’s go in and talk with Scooter and your mom.
I nodded and we went in. Justin took my hand
and entwined our fingers. We both looked down and smiled. We walked to Scooter
and Justin went with him in another room. I sat there and called my mom.
(Justin’s POV)
(YN) nodded
and we went in. I took her hand and entwined our fingers. We both looked down
and smiled. We walked to Scooter and I went with him in another room. (YN) sat
there and called her mom. I heard yelling.
S: Justin,
you can’t trust anybody. Even if you found a girl on the street!
J: Scooter!
Don’t call her just a girl from the street. I really like her. And I want that
she is mine forever OK?
S: Maybe
you like her but you can’t trust anybody. Do you know anything about her? Do
you know where she’s from? Do you know anything about her family?
J: Yes, I
do. She is from Canada and in the summer vacation she lives or lived with her
best friend Grace in a house in California. Her parents have their jobs in
Canada. I really like her and I want that she join me on my tour. I really and
I mean I really like her. Please Scooter just accepts my decision that (YN)
comes with me on tour. If you know her better you will see that she is the best
girl a guy could wish for.
S: Wow man.
I think you really like her. Ok she can come with us.
J: Are you
serious? Thanks!
Scooter nodded
and we both walked out. (YN) sat there with a smile on her face.
(End of Justin’s POV)
I sat there with a smile on my face. After a while Justin and Scooter
came in.
J: You can join me. Have you called your mom?
(YN): Really?
I got up and jumped up and down up and down. When I sat back we
continued talking.
(YN): I talked with my mom and she said yes. Justin ran to me and hugged
me. But Justin my mom said that she and my dad want to get to know you before I
join you and that’s the problem. You have tomorrow a concert in another city
and my mom doesn’t allow me to join you till she knows you personality.
I saw despair in Justin's face.
What do we do now? Am I never seeing Justin again? Can I join him?
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