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He pulled me closer to him and wrapped his arms
around my waist. I loved this feeling be close to Justin. It was like I’m in
heaven. With my head by his bare and hot
chest a fell asleep!
Chapter 7:
When I woke up on the next day, Justin laid beside me with a smile on his
face. It was just amazing to wake up beside my dream boy. With sleepy eyes I
looked at him.
J: Morning honey. Did you sleep well?
(YN): Morning Justin. Yes. Why shouldn’t I sleep well when my dream boy lay
beside me! I winked at him. What about you? Did you sleep well?
J: Aww you’re so cute. I don’t slept very well.
I got up and sat in front of him.
(YN): Why? Was it because of me?
J*laughing*: No honey! Don’t worry. I was just so nervous to meet Sel
today. You know, I’m her ex-boyfriend and I don’t know how she reacts when I
tell her that I don’t love her anymore and that I’ve a new girlfriend.
(YN): Oh Justin.
He looked down on his lap. I took his jaw with my thumb and lifted it.
(YN):
Justin, look in my eyes. He looked me deep in my eyes. Don’t worry Justin. I’m
here for you. I’m with you and we stuck in this together and we get through it
all. OK? Why haven’t you waked me up? I
had been growing together with you. I had been
talking with you and all what you want.
J: Aww
thank you so much. I love you honey but I never would have woken you because
when you sleep you look like a sleeping angel. You’re an angel.
(YN):
Thanks Justin but next time please wakes me up if something bothering you or
you can’t sleep ok? Can you promise me that?
J: Ok
I promise you that! I love you.
(YN):
I love you too.
I
smiled at Justin. He leaned in to kiss me. Our lips finally meet each other.
Thousand of sparks flow in the air. Justin kissed me harder. Because I sat on
the bed, Justin took me by my shoulders and laid me on the bed. He got on the
top of me and whispered in my ear:
J: You
know you have promised me something yesterday? Do you remember?
I
nodded and smiled. Justin got down to my neck. I think I had already hickeys
from yesterday. Just as Justin would took of my shirt the door opened again.
Fredo came in. I quickly took Justin off of me.
J:
Fredo not again! What do you want?
A:
Sorry but in half an hour we meet Sel. Have you forgotten?
(YN):
What?? I must get ready! Go out Fredo I must dress myself!
Fredo
quickly got out of our room. I went to my suitcase to look for a perfect
outfit.
(YN):
Justin I need you! What should I wear? What do you think would Sel like? Please
help me you know her the best!
Justin
got out of the bed and got to me. He took me by my waist and pulled me up.
J:
Baby, don’t worry! I’m sure Sel likes you how you are. Just be yourself because
you’re perfect.
(YN):
Aww! Thanks Justin.
I gave
him a soft kiss and he went back in the bed. I took an outfit out of my
suitcase. I moved
from Justin's shirt
and was only in my underwear in front of him. The only thing I thought was: I hope no one comes into the room
now.
J: Baby, why are you
doing this to me?
(YN): Do what?
Justin got off of the
bed and came closer to me he wrapped me by my waist and pulled me closer to
him.
J: That you are so
damn se-cute!
I smiled and he kissed
me. He pulled me against the wall. I wrapped my legs around Justin’s waist. I
felt that he wanted me yet. He went down to my neck.
(YN): Justin, I want
you too but we can’t do it yet! We meet Sel in a few minutes I must get ready
and you too. Let’s continue in the evening.
J: Baby, I want you
NOW. Please common make me happier than I am.
(YN): Justin! Later!
Now let me go. I must get ready!
Justin let me go. I
took on my outfit. It looked like that (http://dvuifktgrlu5d.cloudfront.net/images/outfits/9303676/frisch-in-den-sommer_web.jpg)
(YN): Is this outfit
Ok, Justin?
J: Wow honey! You look
stunning.
I smiled and after
Justin took his outfit on, we both walked out of the room.
A*laughing*: Morning.
Did you both “sleep” well?
J: Stop this! Just let
forget this!
He nodded.
A: We’re here in like
10 minutes. When we get out of the bus a guy took us and brings us to the café,
where we meet Sel.
Justin and I nodded.
We sat down and talked till we finally arrived. I was so excited to meet
Sel. We got in the car and drove to the
café. While we drove with Fredo to the café Justin took my hand and entwined
our fingers. I was so happy. I loved Justin so much he was my dream boy. Justin
came closer to me and kissed my neck.
A: Common guys! Don’t
do it here.
It was so
embarrassing.
J: Fredo! It’s your own fault. You
always bother us. Last night,
this morning, now you have to live with it!
Justin
and Fredo laughed just me, I just blushed. This was so embarrassing for me.
Justin continued to kissing my neck. I liked it but I had already so many
hickeys from yesterday and today come my parents and I think they aren’t happy
if they would know that I have a boyfriend and hickeys.
(YN)*whispering*:
Justin I’m sorry but you must stop! I have already so many hickeys from
yesterday and my parents arrived today. Sorry but you must stop.
J: But
you taste so good.
(YN):
Sorry but you must stop.
A:
Yeah Justin! You’ve heard her you must stop.
Justin
rolled his eyes and when we finally arrived we got out of the car and went in
the café. I was so nervous I would meet the only one Selena Gomez I was so
excited. Sel was already waiting for us in the café. When she saw us she smiled
at Justin and Fredo but her smile disappeared when she saw me. We walked to
her. When we were by Sel she got up and hugged Fredo and gave Justin a kiss on
his check. I was so jealous but I didn’t show it. She looked at me.
S:
Hello, I’m Sel and you!
(YN):
Hi, I’m (YN). I’m a big fan of you! You’re an amazing singer and actress.
S:
Thanks.
She
was really friendly.
J: So,
Sel! We must talk!
S:
About?
J:
About us!
S:
Justin I want you back! I’m so sorry! I still love you!
J: Ok
I accept your apologize but we can’t get back together!
S: Why?
(YN):
Justin, before you answer I think Fredo and I should let you alone talk ok.
Common Fredo let’s go out!
Fredo
nodded and we walked out.
(Justin’s POV)
(YN):
Justin, before you answer I think Fredo and I should let you alone talk ok.
Common Fredo let’s go out!
Fredo
nodded and (YN) and he walked out. She understood everything and she was so
sweet. I loved her so much.
J: Sel
we can’t get back together because I’ve a girlfriend!
S*yelling*:
What! You’ve a girlfriend?
J: Sel
don’t yell at me. We broke up for more than a half year.
S:
But, but I love you!
J:
Sel, I love you too but just as a friend. We aren’t more than friend anymore.
Ok? I’m sorry but you must understand this.
S: Who
is your new girlfriend?
J: It’s
(YN).
S:
What? I hate her! Do you don’t see this? She’s just using you!
I got
up and I think everyone in the café could see that I was angry.
J*yelling*:
Don’t say this! You don’t know her so you can’t hate her! I go! Bye!
S*yelling*:
So that was it? Are you serious?
J*yelling*:
Yes, that was it! Bye!
I was so
angry and mad at her. How could she say that (YN) is only using me? I walked
out to Fredo and (YN).
(YN): Is
everything ok? Have talked to her? What did she said?
J: Yes, can
we go?
(End
of Justin’s POV)
(YN): Is
everything ok? Have talked to her? What did she said?
J: Yes, can
we go?
I nodded and
went to the car with Justin and Fredo. I saw that he was really angry and mad.
What happened in the café? When we
finally arrived at the hotel we went in and immediately in our hotel rooms.
Justin and I were not in the same hotelroom but I think Justin wanted it that
way.
(YN): So
Justin, I go in my room ok?
J: Common
you’re not serious or? Scooter did this I want to be with you in one room.
(YN): But
you-
J: No buts!
You sleep in my room!
(YN): Ok but
Justin my suitcase is in my room!
J: I let it
bring us in my room ok. Don’t worry.
I nodded and
Justin and I walked in his room. When we entered the room my jaw dropped down.
The room was amazing it looked like this (http://www.schoenesschlafzimmer.de/img/slaapkamer_hotel_4.jpg)
(YN): Justin
this is amazing. And expensive or?
J: You like
it? I nodded. No it’s not very expensive.
(YN): I love
it.
I went to
the bed and hopped on it. I sat down.
(YN): Justin
common. I must talk with you!
Justin
walked to me and sat down beside me.
J: Ok what?
(YN): What
happened in the café?
J: Nothing!
(YN): Don’t
lie! Tell me the truth.
J: She said
she wants me back and that she loves me.
(YN): Do you
love her?
J: No! I
love you. I love her yes-
(YN):
What???
J: No not
the way I love you. I love her as a friend.
(YN): Ok!
What time is it?
J: It’s
11:30 a.m. why?
(YN): When
arrive my parents?
J: I don’t
know! I’ll call Scooter.
Just as
Justin would call Scooter, he walked in our room.
S: Hi, why is
(YN) her? You know that she has an own room, Justin?
J: Yes,
Scooter! She’s just yet here. Don’t worry.
Justin lied
and he was pretty good in it.
S: Fine. So
(YN) your parents arrived in half an hour. We should drive to the airport and
bring them to the hotel. Are you coming?
(YN): OK.
Thanks Scooter.
S: No
problem.
I got up and
walked to Scooter.
J: Can I
come with you?
S: No Justin!
I want to talk to (YN)! Alone!
J: Fine!
(YN), I must say you something before you go. Scooter could you just let us one
minute alone please!
Scooter
nodded and I walked with a weird look on my face to Justin.
(YN): What
Justin?
He came
closer to me and gave me a kiss.
J: I just
wanted to say goodbye.
I rolled my
eyes and walked away.
(YN): You’re
so sweet Justin! Bye I love you!
J: Love you
too.
I walked out
of the room and to Scooter.
S: Let’s go!
I nodded and
walked behind him like a little puppy. I was so nervous. Why must Scooter talk
with me? Doesn’t he like me? Thousand of questions were in my head.
awwwwwwww love this story ! So perfect! But can you make it a bit more pervert? But its good :) keep on! and please make it long!!!!!
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DeleteI would make it more pervert but I'm very young and I don't know anything about this them!
please write the next chapter !!! :)
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