'Ello loves :) As you can see we have 2 new writers Gentiana and Shannon. I need only 1 so yeah... Anyway, what you think about them? Tell me :)
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Chapter 9: ‘I wish we could be more than best friends’
My heart started to beat faster. I don’t know what was wrong
with me, I started to get nervous. We were still laying on the sand and Justin
was on top of me.
JB: Remember when we talked on phone and I told you there's one girl that
I can't get out of my mind?
I nod my head.
JB: And then you told me to
tell her how I feel before it's too late’
YN: Yes..? *I stuttered*
JB: Well *he put one of his hands on my cheek and looked deeply
into my eyes*
Whenever I hear your voice, I never stop smiling. Whenever I hear
your laugh, my stomach is filled with butterflies. Whenever I look into your
beautiful eyes, I get lost in them. Whenever I touch you, I feel my body is getting
hotter.
I looked at him in shock. Is he admitting his love for me? Am I
dreaming? I don’t know why, but if it’s a dream, I don’t want to wake up.
JB: I know we are very close friends and it’s ok if you
don’t like me back. I just couldn’t keep these feeling to myself and I wish… I
wish we could be more than best friends.
He leaned and found his way to my lips. I closed my eyes and
he did the same. He pressed his soft lips on mine and butterflies filled in my
stomach. My body started to feel weak. This feeling I’m having it’s not like
when I kissed Harry. Nothing can compare Justin’s kiss to Harry’s. Justin’s
kiss is soft, full with passion, love. Harry’s kiss was with passion and
hunger, hunger for love or maybe for more…
I slowly opened my eyes. Justin sat on the sand and I sat
too. I was in shock, I couldn’t say anything. Justin scratched his neck and
looked at me.
JB: C’mon, say something
He looked at me with puppy eyes and I just smiled
YN: I…I… *I started
to stutter* I like you too…
That’s all I could say. I really don’t know why I said it,
it just came out of my mouth. I looked at Justin to see his face expression. He
had a big smile on his face.
JB: You really like me?
I nod my head and he grinned.
JB: You don’t know
how happy I am right now!
He hugged me tight and I giggled. He stood up and helped me
to stand up too. We walked down the beach for 10 minutes just enjoying the sun
and each other. At this moment I don’t want to think about Harry or my mixed
feelings. Now I’m enjoying Justin’s company. That’s all it maters. Me and
Justin walking on the beach.
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It's a shorty, sorry :/ I'm gonna try to make next chapter longer. I really don't like to spend my time writing a stor, but I'm doing it for you ;)
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