2 Jul 2012

I wish: Chapter 9


'Ello loves :) As you can see we have 2 new writers Gentiana and Shannon. I need only 1 so yeah... Anyway, what you think about them? Tell me :)
Previous chapters:  Chapter1 Chapter2 Chapter3 Chapter4 Chapter5 Chapter6 Chapter7 Chapter8

Chapter 9: ‘I wish we could be more than best friends’


My heart started to beat faster. I don’t know what was wrong with me, I started to get nervous. We were still laying on the sand and Justin was on top of me.

JB: Remember when we talked on phone and I told you there's one girl that I can't get out of my mind?

I nod my head.

JB:  And then you told me to tell her how I feel before it's too late’
YN: Yes..? *I stuttered*
JB: Well *he put one of his hands on my cheek and looked deeply into my eyes*
Whenever I hear your voice, I never stop smiling. Whenever I hear your laugh, my stomach is filled with butterflies. Whenever I look into your beautiful eyes, I get lost in them. Whenever I touch you, I feel my body is getting hotter.

I looked at him in shock. Is he admitting his love for me? Am I dreaming? I don’t know why, but if it’s a dream, I don’t want to wake up.

JB: I know we are very close friends and it’s ok if you don’t like me back. I just couldn’t keep these feeling to myself and I wish… I wish we could be more than best friends.

He leaned and found his way to my lips. I closed my eyes and he did the same. He pressed his soft lips on mine and butterflies filled in my stomach. My body started to feel weak. This feeling I’m having it’s not like when I kissed Harry. Nothing can compare Justin’s kiss to Harry’s. Justin’s kiss is soft, full with passion, love. Harry’s kiss was with passion and hunger, hunger for love or maybe for more…
I slowly opened my eyes. Justin sat on the sand and I sat too. I was in shock, I couldn’t say anything. Justin scratched his neck and looked at me.

JB: C’mon, say something

He looked at me with puppy eyes and I just smiled

YN: I…I… *I  started to stutter* I like you too…

That’s all I could say. I really don’t know why I said it, it just came out of my mouth. I looked at Justin to see his face expression. He had a big smile on his face.

JB: You really like me?

I nod my head and he grinned.

 JB: You don’t know how happy I am right now!


He hugged me tight and I giggled. He stood up and helped me to stand up too. We walked down the beach for 10 minutes just enjoying the sun and each other. At this moment I don’t want to think about Harry or my mixed feelings. Now I’m enjoying Justin’s company. That’s all it maters. Me and Justin walking on the beach.
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It's a shorty, sorry :/ I'm gonna try to make next chapter longer. I really don't like to spend my time writing a stor, but I'm doing it for you ;)

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