Sorry for taking too long. Btw, I changed my twitter username from:
@flirtybieber to @Nerii1D. So follow me, I follow back.
Previous chapters: http://www.twitlonger.com/show/il61ea
Chapter
18: ‘YES!’
Recap: I was walking down the path for few minutes
when I reached a field when suddenly...
I
saw a blanket with food on it http://4.bp.bl/-yrAArc/-Y1H47_wide.jpg
I smiled knowing who could make this. I walked closer but someone quickly
closed my eyes from behind making me frown.
??: Guess who?
Person whispered in my ear.
I smiled at his voice. I quickly turned around and hugged him.
YN: Justin!
JB: Hello *he smiled*
I smiled back and pulled
away. I furrowed my eyebrows thinking for a while.
YN: Why am I here? Why girls
left me? Did you borrow them a car? Why are you—
I was cut by Justin’s lips
on mine. He softly yet passionately kissed me while putting his hands around my
waist. I put my hands around his neck and deepened the kiss. After a while we
pulled away.
JB: You talk too much *he
whispered making me shiver*
Justin grabbed my hand
JB: I missed you and I
wanted to see you.
YN: I missed you too! *I
gave him a quick hug*
JB: So what do you think
about a picnic in a nice sunny day with me?
YN: hm… I don’t know… Will
there be any papz or crazy fans?
JB: Nope. Just you and me
*he winked*
YN: Ok, then I want a picnic
with Justin Bieber! *I laughed*
Justin laughed too. We sat
on a blanket.
Justin: Strawberries for my
beautiful girl? *he smiled*
He said ‘for MY girl’.
I’m his. I wish we were official and I could call him MY boyfriend…
YN: I’d love to. *I smiled*
Justin took a strawberry
JB: Open wide, YN
I opened my mouth and he fed
me a strawberry. I started giggling.
JB: What’s so funny?
YN: oh nothing. Just I feel
like a baby who’s being fed by his daddy *I giggled again*
JB: But you are a baby *he
smirked*
YN: I am not! *I pouted and
crossed my hands*
JB: Yes you are
YN: No! *I shouted*
After that Justin jumped on
me and started to tickle me. I’m a very ticklish you know.
YN: Justin…St…Stop… *I said
while laughing*
JB: Aww, baby wants dady to
stop? *he laughed*
YN: Ju…Justin! HAHAHA
He stopped tickling me and
sat back smirking at me.
YN: You are a very very mean
person! *I pouted*
JB: And you are very cute
and don’t forget beautiful.
I started to feel my cheeks
blushing so I quickly turned away so he couldn’t notice.
He
probably saw it because he placed few fingers under my chin and moved my face
to look him in the eyes.
JB: I love you *he
whispered*
Justin leaned in and pressed
his lips on mine. This kiss was full of love, passion. After seconds I pulled
away.
YN: I love you too, Justin
*I smiled*
Rest of the time we were
just sitting and talking about random stuff. I feel like he’s the one. The one
I could talk all night, the one who can make me smile when I’m sad. But there’s
still one thing missing.
JB: Let’s go for a walk?
I nodded my head and we
stood up. He took my hand and we went in that way where small patch led us.
After few minutes we were next to a pond.
JB: Wanna go for a swim?
YN: I don’t have my bikini
on.
I thought for a while. Sure
why not. I took off my clothes and Justin did the same. Justin quickly ran in
the pond and dived under water. I giggled and went in the water too.
We swam for a bit when
Justin grabbed me by my waist and turned me to face him.
YN: Hi there *I smiled*
Justin smiled too and kissed
my lips.
JB: There’s one thing I want
to ask you for a really long time.
I just looked him in the
eyes waiting for him to continue.
JB: I love you so much and I
know my life without you would be only a dark cloud. Would you brighten my day
and be the sun in my life by being my girlfriend?
YN: YES! *I hugged him* I
love you too and…Did you know how long I waited for you to say that? *I punched
his shoulder playfully but he just laughed*
JB: I’m happy to have you in
my life *he leaned in and kissed me*
~THE END~
K. That’s it. I’m done with
this story. I don’t like writing it and I feel forced to do that. I don’t know
if someone is reading it but anyway. I just want to start writing 1D story
‘cause it’s more interesting. So BYE for now. Don't hate me :3 Nah, hate me if you want, I understand you. I'm a horrible person but this blog is DEAD. Bye bye ;)
- Neringa x
Aww why do you hav to end this story?????????? it's so cute!!!! I wanted you to continue this story. Well too bad.
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DeleteSame I know your all about 1D and thats great and all but usually writers write about what there fans want and a little mix of what u want it wouldn't be an amazing story if I made it all bout what u want I respect u and all an have nothing against 1D but and input mean a lot when writing because u have to engage ur readers personally I think u should continue ! ( do u know If Astrid will ever come back ? ) just curious miss her and hope she's doing ok
ReplyDeleteI liked this story ALOT but i respect ur desicion (: please more amazing stories
ReplyDeleteI loved this story just hated the ending. I miss the one who did falling for a fan I miss her :/
ReplyDeleteI know! :( and this writer is very mean! Really! It's more interesting! Urgh!
DeleteI'm not mean! I just don't feel like continuing this story. Sorry, okay? SORRY! For Gods sake...
DeleteI thought falling for a fan was litrally the best story id ever read who everwrote that was really talented!!!!
DeleteWell then erm....I understand I would like more JB storys but never mind I'll just find some 1 else :)
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